“MY SWELLING PLACE”
Everyone has a place to come back to feel
safe. It is a place to share their smile, laugh, weep, sadness and happiness.
It shares to make everyone inside feel safe from all of the dangers outside
there. My home is my dwelling place to share all of my feeling all days, years,
even rest of my life. My home takes the stand of my growth step from the words
go to present. Although it’s just a simple place located in the edge of city,
but everything is served for me there.
Lie down and lazing on my bed makes me pleasant. My
bedroom is the most comfortable place to study, recess, sleep, phoning and spend
my spare time. Although it is not huge and less of facilities, But I can study
and sleep well. I get enough recess without any distractions, enjoy my spare
time, even I can spend more than three hours for phoning. Further, my bedroom is a pantry of
inspiration. I’ve been founding a thousand inspirations there, so that I called
it as “My Very Own Never-Land”.
Share and get on together with my family is a
blessing. My family room becomes a convention hall for the members of family.
Problems, announcements, jokes, anger, discussion and planning are carried out
there. I can share anything to my family there without any pressure. I learned
so much not only to be a good speaker but also a good listener during those
activities.
Cooking, Mess together and enjoy the meal are the
special moment. My dining room is located one place with the kitchen. I often
help my mum cook something even I’m a boy. That’s myself happiness to help her
and study about cooking. Serve breakfast, lunch and dinner are my favorite
activity in the kitchen. I feel full of love when enjoy the meal together with
them. It’s perfect.
Enjoy the fresh air, feeding my eyes with
greenly-trees are refreshing. Whether morning or night I come out to my foyer
to refresh my mind when the boredom are came over to me. I sing a song loudly
while enjoy the fresh air. Everything seems so peaceful and I feel really home.
All its weaknesses, all its superiorities, I don’t
mind after all. The most important thing is I have a place to come back to feel
safe. I am so grateful for everything inside of my swelling place. I love to
lie down and lazing on my bed. I absolutely love share and get on together with
my family. I damn miss when I help my mother to cook something. They are
accompanied me and become a witness of my step growth all at once. I love my
very-own never-land, I love my swelling place and I love my home. There is
where I belong.
---“Home Sweet
Home”---
By: Nanda Habib
Firdaus
INFORMATION:
TOPIC:
“The Place You
Feel Safe”
TITLE:
“My Swelling
Place”
GENERIC STRUCTURE
Identification:
Everyone has a place to come back to
feel safe. It is a place to share their smile, laugh, weep, sadness and
happiness. It shares to make everyone inside feel safe from all of the dangers
outside there. My home is my dwelling place to share all of my feeling all
days, years, even rest of my life. My home takes the stand of my growth step
from the words go to present. Although it’s just a simple place located in the
edge of city, but everything is served for me there. (92 words)
Lie down and lazing on my bed makes
me pleasant. My bedroom is the most comfortable place to study, recess, sleep,
phoning and spend my spare time. Although it is not huge and less of
facilities, But I can study and sleep well. I get enough recess without any
distractions, enjoy my spare time, even I can spend more than three hours for
phoning. Further, my bedroom is a pantry
of inspiration. I’ve been founding a thousand inspirations there, so that I
called it as “My Very Own Never-Land”.
Share and get on together with my
family is a blessing. My family room becomes a convention hall for the members
of family. Problems, announcements, jokes, anger, discussion and planning are
carried out there. I can share anything to my family there without any
pressure. I learned so much not only to be a good speaker but also a good
listener during those activities.
Cooking, Mess together and enjoy the
meal are the special moment. My dining room is located one place with the
kitchen. I often help my mum cook something even I’m a boy. That’s myself
happiness to help her and study about cooking. Serve breakfast, lunch and
dinner are my favorite activity in the kitchen. I feel full of love when enjoy
the meal together with them. It’s perfect.
Enjoy the fresh air, feeding my eyes
with greenly-trees are refreshing. Whether morning or night I come out to my
foyer to refresh my mind when the boredom are came over to me. I sing a song
loudly while enjoy the fresh air. Everything seems so peaceful and I feel really
home. (243 Words)
Closing/Conclusion:
All its weaknesses, all its superiorities, I don’t mind after all. The most important thing is I have a
place to come back to feel safe. I am so grateful for everything inside of my
swelling place. I love to lie down and lazing on my bed. I absolutely love
share and get on together with my family. I damn miss when I help my mother to
cook something. They are accompanied me and become a witness of my step growth
all at once. I love my very-own never-land, I love my swelling place and I love
my home. There is where I belong. (108 Words)
WORD IN USE
- Opening: 92 words
- Content: 273 words
- Closing: 108 words
- Total: 473 words
